Restructure
I knew it was too good to be true.
Well that’s not at all true.
But I realised I needed to be critical as I know others would be.
I had a panic earlier when I realised the root of my mistake.
And spent the whole afternoon out on the links figuring it out.
I’m ready to tackle tomorrow with a plan.
I believe the story will make better sense for it.
The good thing is my second chapter made sense all of its own.
Restructure